Great use of music in your edit, and your cinematography is quite effective as well. Some black frames, not sure if they are intentional, almost flashes, like the one after "droppings" (continuity issue in that segment as well). The sounds needs to be mixed better, mic sound, it's just too soft in some points. Are you using the actual mic he's holding? Overall, I like the character you've created. The context is lacking for a wider audience, but for your audience at USC, I think it's fine. The intro mentions loud tones eminating from the boom box, but we never hear them, so I think I'd change that graphic to omit that line and put University of SC to try and draw in a wider audience. It's quirky, and I like that.
Great use of music in your edit, and your cinematography is quite effective as well. Some black frames, not sure if they are intentional, almost flashes, like the one after "droppings" (continuity issue in that segment as well). The sounds needs to be mixed better, mic sound, it's just too soft in some points. Are you using the actual mic he's holding? Overall, I like the character you've created. The context is lacking for a wider audience, but for your audience at USC, I think it's fine. The intro mentions loud tones eminating from the boom box, but we never hear them, so I think I'd change that graphic to omit that line and put University of SC to try and draw in a wider audience. It's quirky, and I like that.
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