Nice opening credit and music choices throughout. Like your use of insert shots – toe tapping, that sort of thing, and you also did a good job on cutting on the action. The bedroom scene is weak – acting, lighting, framing, and this takes away some from the whole. Overall, an effective idea for a short. Andrea’s acting is wonderful, she is natural, and Stephanie looks the perfect counterpoint in many ways – I can see why you cast like you did and it works. Kyle could be more natural with his lines, but that is the writing as well as acting. Anxious to see what film fests you choose and hear about the results.
Nice opening credit and music choices throughout. Like your use of insert shots – toe tapping, that sort of thing, and you also did a good job on cutting on the action. The bedroom scene is weak – acting, lighting, framing, and this takes away some from the whole. Overall, an effective idea for a short. Andrea’s acting is wonderful, she is natural, and Stephanie looks the perfect counterpoint in many ways – I can see why you cast like you did and it works. Kyle could be more natural with his lines, but that is the writing as well as acting. Anxious to see what film fests you choose and hear about the results.
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